Based on a lecture by Ross Collinsprofessor of communication, North Dakota State University The title above a story in a newspaper, magazine, newsletter or, for that matter, web site is called a headline, or "hed" "head" in print journalism "heading" in online pages. It has the same function in mass media writing as a lead, to call attention to the story, to snare people in.
One comment he repeated several times was that parts of my text sounded "too conversational. You'd be better off asking for clarification instead of guessing at the meaning. He also suggested revisions that increased the word count and complexity of the sentences without adding any additional meaning.
I disagree with those comments and I don't like the suggested edits, and here's why: You're exactly like me here. I also disagree with pointless elaboration.
However, that doesn't mean that there's never a reason to elaborate. You've been silent on why you were suggested to elaborate. Maybe the supervisor didn't tell you, maybe he did but you don't think it's relevant, maybe you subconsciously omitted that from the question, or maybe you intentionally omitted it.
I'm not here to judge; but it's impossible to review someone's feedback as meaningful if we don't know the problem the feedback is trying to point out. There are reason to elaborate an explanation: Legal reasons Disambiguation that may not seem necessary to you, but may be helpful to people who aren't as knowledgeable about the subject matter.
Rephrasing in order to avoid certain words which could be mistaken as keywords in a tangentially related subject matter e.
I believe that sometimes always? I agree with your intention, but not your statement. This is very dependent on who your target audience is. For laymen, simple is most often the best option.
For experts, you should favor precision and disambiguation, even if that entails a higher complexity. For lawyers and legalese documentation, pedantic precision and utter disambiguation is the standard.
I also believe the impenetrable "academic" writing style of many scientists is a major shortcoming - it only hinders communication among scientists and isolates us from the public, who can't make sense of what we're trying to say.
I have yet to lay eyes on a single document that is written in a way that: The laymen find it clear and understandable The experts find it detailed enough to rely on it The lawyers find it disambiguated enough that there are no reasonable loopholes If there were a writing standard that could fulfill all of these requirements, it would be the only writing standard that was in use since it has no drawbacks.
As a technical writer, you'll generally be writing documentation for experts. Experts generally don't see linguistic simplicity as the main priority. Therefore, simplicity should not be your main focus when writing.
The higher word counts, more complex sentence structures, and lack additional meaning in the revisions were a clear sign to me, at least that he was taking things in the wrong direction. More often than not, reducing sentence complexity leads to a higher word count, and reducing the word count leads to increased sentence complexity.The difference between those two passages is the difference between unclear and clear writing.
The rewritten version goes beyond a literal transcription of the original and is the product of fresh thinking about how to tell a plombier-nemours.coms: 8. Note: Ever wonder what the difference is between writing an article and writing a blog post?
It’s a topic that comes up a lot. Besides style and research, you might be surprised by one of the key differences between blogs and articles.
This would come in handy for writing a personal essay or an opinion column for a paper, but should not be used when the goal is to simply inform the audience. Following those tips will make. Dec 04, · Column writing is the only writing of the newspaper which has literary touch while others like news, editorial, features do not consist this element.
Promotion of Democratic Values. Editorial vs Article. There are many different types of writings in a newspaper. A reporter writing about an event or presenting a news story is a common type of .
*There is a difference between helpful, thorough information and rambling thoughts that veer away from the subject matter. Keep things concise but complete, and you won’t have to .